Micro-Drama: Pitch

Micro-Drama: Pitch
My Micro Drama pitch was a comedy, Similair to Ali G. It was about a boy, Curtis Tiplady. Who run the town of Burley In Wharfedale. However there was a threat to curtis' position in shape of Dom ellis. A competitor to curtis' status as the boy who run the town. Basicly Dom come to burley and took over the bike shed with his 'crew'. There was then a battle to retain the bike shed as curtis' layout. They then proceeded to fight And curtis won over the bike shed once again and retained hios crown.

My plan Is trying to take a comic twist by Making the two characters trying to act like 'Badmen' but it doesn't work. I would of used the mise en scene as the actual burley village and dress the two characters in stereotypical 'chav clothes'

The only negative to my idea is that it wouldn't link in with future tasks. Also it lacks a great storyline, so it may be hard to make funny